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The moon is alone in the sky tonight
Not a single star is showing off its light
My mind wanders as I wonder why
Why the moon wanted the sky

The moon is in pain, did you not know?
Just look at its scars, not including what it will not show
The sun itself cut and burned her skin
So when Luna sets for her night, you’ll know just where she’s been

The moon is alone in the sky tonight
And her loneliness if filling her with fright
Afraid of loneliness and afraid of eternity
Praying that someday, a lover will answer her plea

As I watch her from below, my heart goes out
I will give her a love which she cannot doubt
I will become a star, and I will share the sky
All to let her know that she is always in my eyes.
:icontruefyr:
Just an interesting theme I came up with for today's post. I can't say that this was my favorite execution of an idea from my mind to the paper, but it worked to some extent. Enjoy!
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*ThornsofPurpleRoses Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is beautiful :heart:
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:icontruefyr:
Thank you very much!
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~SourAir Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is... Really amazing. It's so creative and inspiring! I really love it, great work. :) The only thing you might wanna fix is a quick typo in the second line of the third stanza- I think that 'if' is supposed to be an 'is'. Other than that quick thing, it's perfect. Wonderful job! :heart:
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:icontruefyr:
Right you are! Thank you for the spot! That'll get fixed as soon as I have a chance. Thank you for the watch too!
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~SourAir Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! ^^ I really like your work!
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The wolves show their love for miss Luna, even though they see black and white, I would venture the moon is always brightest
to them at night, and lights the way for their pack's steps, even for the young ones, following their parent's tails.
They hear the moon's cries and feel her tears, that are like ghosts on our human skin, and when we look up, it is what we see then that makes us see past the ghostly light on our skin. The moon has always been a mystery, and her sky, her stars.
I am writing a book, but it has been put on hold since my computer just quit on me. ~Another reason to save for a laptop.~ :) ;) ~
But this piece is yet again inspiring, and a favorite piece indeed. Very well written. :3
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Keen wit and sentiment in this one. Every stanza.
1. Join #literatureforall if I haven't invited.
2.You inspired "Come, Heal Me."
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