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Shy smiles and fluttering butterflies,
My heart would beat faster when I looked into your eyes.
Even then, as I held you warmly in my arms,
Every word you said put me under your charm.
Dozing off, I sent you a little smile.
And told you that it’s fine to fall asleep for a while.

When you awoke, the sun was setting for its own time to sleep.
So I pulled you close and breathed in so deep.
Quietly, in the dark, I slowly fell in love.
Gently in my arms, I called you my little dove.
:icontruefyr:
Hooray, love poetry! Thanks to [link] UkeBug for the idea!
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~sleepy-kisses Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this :D It's a nice love poem, without being overly cliche. Great job!
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:icontruefyr:
Thank you very much! :)
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~SereneCyrene Feb 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Cute! :aww:
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~UkeBug Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my God, this is freaking gorgeous. AND I WAS A TEENSY PART OF THE IDEA WOO!
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Oh come on, you were a little more than a teensy part of the idea. The poem probably wouldn't exist if you hadn't suggested the theme.
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~UkeBug Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
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